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It was another day outside
I was walking by my self
then I see a friend
and I ask whats wrong
she says she feels hurt
She doesnt know what to do
I ask where does it hurt
she says its her heart
her heart is whats hurting
I ask what can I do
She looks up at me
And she says come closer
I came closer without thinking
She lays a kiss on my lips
It was a kiss from a rose
I didnt think I wouldve
liked to get some more
She broke away and said
Do you care for me
and I said I did
And she asked do you
She hesitated for a little
Except my love for you
I was a little shocked
I didnt know what to say
But I said yes anyway
She had smiled and said
Im not hurt anymore
I looked and smiled
She looked and smiled
They looked and smiled
©2008-2009 ~IrritatedDog
:iconirritateddog:

Author's Comments

I made this poem for no reason,thats probably why it sucks.Or why I dislike it.

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:iconshine-elementx:
I like it, the flow of it is a bit shaky, but overall it gets a fav on my list :D
:iconirritateddog:
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:iconanimejunki13:
nice... i say it would of been better as a story... you write good i just might be saying that because everything i make becomes long and story like :P

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Go, go, go, go, go, go
Go, shorty
It's your birthday
We gon' party like it's your birthday
We gon' sip Bacardi like it's your birthday
And you know we don't give a fuck
cause it's not your birthday!
:iconirritateddog:
I did this randomly.
:iconanimejunki13:
lol

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Go, go, go, go, go, go
Go, shorty
It's your birthday
We gon' party like it's your birthday
We gon' sip Bacardi like it's your birthday
And you know we don't give a fuck
cause it's not your birthday!
:iconredips626:
awww...
i almost cryed
but in a good way
^^
:iconirritateddog:
Aww.

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Life is a bitch. That may be true, but it's your bitch. So do yourself a favor, put your bitch in line and show'em who calls the shots, lest you get screwed over.
:iconredips626:
he he
(i put it in my faves :star:)
:iconirritateddog:
lol, kk

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Life is a bitch. That may be true, but it's your bitch. So do yourself a favor, put your bitch in line and show'em who calls the shots, lest you get screwed over.

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